Of all the 40 students in this class,20 students are girls,20 students are boys and all have toys从语法角度讲这句话对吗?怎么改呢重点是20 students are girls,20 students areboys 这两句话各是个完整的句子啊。能这样用

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Of all the 40 students in this class,20 students are girls,20 students are boys and all have toys
从语法角度讲这句话对吗?怎么改呢
重点是20 students are girls,20 students areboys 这两句话各是个完整的句子啊。能这样用吗?

首先,20 students are boys是多余的.前面部分已经暗含了这一句的意思在内了,一个人不是男的,就是女的,不可能有第3种情况存在.
去掉多余的部分后,剩下的两个分句用and连接,就更容易让人接受.后面分句最好加上they做主语.

第二个20students重复了吧,改为the rest。
当然能,后面还有一句话呢,所以可以并列。

这个班里有40个学生,20个女孩,20个男孩,都有玩具

Of all the 40 ...与后面的all have toys有些冲突,最好分成两句:
Of all the 40 students in this class, half(“一半”,更简洁) are girls and half are boys.They all have toys.