谁帮我看看语句通不通顺My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,I am 13 years old.I don't have English name.My house includes the 4 people person,they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.I love them.I like to play with my younger brother toge
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谁帮我看看语句通不通顺
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,I am 13 years old.I don't have English name.My house includes the 4 people person,they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.I love them.I like to play with my younger brother together,he is lovely.My ideal will be to become a painter,I like to paint.并把意思写在下面~(自己写的)
English name前面应加个an;
My house includes the 4 people person这句不能用the,people和person重复;改为There are 4 persons in my family 比较好;
they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.with改成and;
idel是个形容词,应该用dream,My dream is to become a painter.I like paniting.
给你改写一下吧,
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.我的中文名叫刘玉坤,我没有英文名.今年13岁.
There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.
我的家庭有四个成员,我的父亲、母亲、弟弟还有我.我爱我的家人.我喜欢和我弟弟一起玩耍,他很可爱.
I like painting,my dream is to become a painter(becoming a painter).
我喜欢绘画,我的梦想是成为一名画家.
我的中文名字叫刘宇坤,今年13岁,我没有英文名字。我家一共有4人,爸爸,妈妈,弟弟和我,我爱他们。我喜欢和弟弟一起玩耍,因为他很可爱。我的理想是成为一名画家,因为我喜欢画画。
写得不错
My house (home)has 4 people , they are my father, mother, younger brother with(and) me. I like to play with my younger brother together.
最好是"I like playing" My dream is to become a painter, I like painting.
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun, I am 13 years old. I don't have English names. There are 4 people in my family, they are my father, mother, younger brother and me. I love them. I like playing with my younger brother together, he is lovely. I want to be a painter, I like painting.