she won the first prize,while her brother was awarded the second.英语改错

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she won the first prize,while her brother was awarded the second.英语改错

她得到了一等奖,同时她的兄弟被授予二等奖.

是不是那个逗号的问题。
加逗号表示转折,不加是同时,这里应该是同时的意思。

while改为and
she won the first prize,--and--her brother was awarded the second.