请问这句有没有语法错误或语病?相同的意思有没有更好的表述啊?The fiittest survival,is the basic rule of the theory of evolution which is made by Darwin.

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请问这句有没有语法错误或语病?相同的意思有没有更好的表述啊?
The fiittest survival,is the basic rule of the theory of evolution which is made by Darwin.

语法上没有错误,is前的逗号要去掉.
但这句话的主干是:surviral is the rule.
幸存的(物种)是规则,
感觉有些怪怪的.
我改成:
The fittest survival followes the basic rule of the theory of evolution which is made by Darwin.

该句绝对正确。
适者生存是达尔文提出的生物进化论的基本法则。
相似的表达:The fiittest survival, the basic rule of the theory of evolution ,is made by Darwin.